Essay is good but a starting paragraph should must be v impressing because it immediately creates a viewpoint for the whole essay to reader. it should always start it with impressing thought for example u can start it from this paragraph:
When complaints are freely heard, deeply considered, and speedily reformed then is the outmost bound of civil liberty attained. That wise man looks for Milton
No power on this earth can block the truth as its God who, being the truth himself, always guards it. Nowhere in the history could the truth ever be suppressed, it always revealed itself in some other form and with dangerous consequences. British philosopher John Stuart Mill underlined the need for free speech mainly for three reasons. he believes that freedom to read and write is an important element to expose and reveal the truth, to ensure self-development and self-fulfillment of citizens and to help ensure participation of the citizens in a democracy.
Not only the starting paragraph but every new outline or paragraphs first lines should be impressing. it gives a very good and thoughtful effect on your writing. As when after introduction you will write on media in Pakistan then start like:
(the Pakistani media is an enthusiastic member of the new warrior clan of the 21st century and despite belonging to war torn country. is playing active role in keeping with the demands of the modern times. by airing in divergent views and cross questioning on significant national and social issues the media reflects and informs public opinion and practically shares the task of parliament.(then write as u wrote in your essay on Pakistani media it was just an example starting paragraph and you can write some more good material or your own good starting Paras.
One thing more I would say the essay on media always comes with a different side it is not in a simple form that media in Pakistan or role of media. it is always in a different form like the role of media and terrorism, the positive role of media in politics or its effects or yellow journalism etc etc.then u can also add an outline of media as the fourth pillar of the state
I hope these tips will be useful for you. you doing good bas every time you start new paragraph ,start it with impressing lines.your concusion paragraph was excellent. Keep it up. Best of luck.
Mere fana honay mei meri fana ka fana hona ha
Ar meine apni fanaa mei ae khuda tujhy payaa...!
Role of media in every country is very much significant and crucial because it is the one who is responsible to create good image or even destroy the created image in the country as well as even millions of its respondents outside the country. When we talk about the country like Pakistan than we should not forget the role of media in its downfall and its negative image which is being created all over the globe, according to me media should be very much liberal but still it should not be so much liberal and free that it should make fun of significant and critical personalities and names of the country. The role of media in Pakistan is very much negative as they are just running in to the competition and not for the sake of the nation; they are very much less patriotic and nationalist because they have the aim for the success of their particular organization and not the success of the nation.
Role Of Media In Pakistan
This competition has dented the image of Pakistan in the entire world as we have destroyed the fame, respect and dignity in the entire globe just because of the unlimited freedom of media and liberalization. There is no doubt that media should be liberal and should have the right to say or to show anything but one thing should be kept in mind that they should not affect the national interest as well as the national interest and the national dignity of the state.
According to me, the media in Pakistan should play a role that should be helpful in the cause of the reviving the lost respect and dignity. The media should be fair and should show what is real but instead of making fun of the political leaders or even the head of the states they should be carrying out such programs which should be eye opening and realistic and instead of fun making they should play their key role in the upbringing of the national interest as well as the for the sake of national cause.
Media should create an example in the entire world that the image of Pakistan which is being created in the entire world is just false and is just an illusion created by the world mafia against the Muslim countries especially against the Pakistan. So if Pakistan has to regain the respect and the dignity than the media of Pakistan has to fill the gap and will have to step forward and to take up the responsibility for this respective cause.